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5分雅思作文和8分雅思作文的区别

2016-10-24编辑: Tortoise来自: 环球教育整理

  雅思考试的时候不少同学都觉得自己雅思写作写的挺好,但是成绩出来发现只有5分,你知道5分雅思作文和8分雅思作文的区别吗?

  首先,全文的观点很难做到创新,一般的回答无非就是同意或者是不同意(积极的/好处多的、消极的/弊端的),顶多再加上一个中立的回答即两边都同意。如果只有主题部分的论点可能做到创新,但是创新则需要时间琢磨,另一方面则是一旦脑洞打开了可能不太符合主题,或者不符合西方的观点。而罪域一些比较生僻的题目来说,比如犯罪类,除非是专业的学生,能够提出两个论点来完整基本要求就已经非常不错了。

  其次如果当大家的逻辑都比较不错的时候,剩下的拼的就是语言,不一定要求什么高大上的词汇所以外国人最看重的或者说读起来最舒服的语言不是高难度的词汇堆积,而是不断变化的句型结构。当然所有的前提在于你英语属于基础不要太差,词汇量过4000的基础上。

  除了以上实用技巧之外再给大家推荐几个雅思写作的技巧:

  一、前进式(用来论证advantage好的方面)

  1 benefit from 从……当中获益

  例句:Their command of the language in later life will benefit from this early exposure, while learning other language subsequently will be easier from them.(剑9例句)

  详解:【注意】上面这个短语与is beneficial to……(对…有益)的主语和宾语位置正好相反,而且地道英文中有时还可以把它们放在文章的不同位置交替使用,以实现句式多样化。

  【反义】suffer from… 遭受…… 【反义】be damaged by… 被……破坏

  2 invest in 对…投资

  例句:In many countries, employees are encouraged to invest in private pension (养老金)plans. 详解:【近义】fund sth.

“雅思写作5分作文和8分作文的区别”

  例句:This affordability is further enhanced by the use of credit cards and loans in order to fund travel, especially for holiday purposes.(剑8例句) 【对比】be seriously underfunded资金严重不足的

  【相关】impose a high tax on sth. 对某事物征收重税,例句:为了促进公民的健康有一些欧洲国家have imposed a high tax on junk food, 俗称“肥胖税”(fat tax)

  例句:As well as physical activity, high tax penalties (n.处罚)could be imposed on high-fat food products, tobacco and alcohol.(剑9例句)

  3 promote creativity/environmental awareness/healthy lifestyles/gender equality/cultural diversity/economic growth/sustainable development/healthy competition促进创造力/环境意识/健康的生活方式/性别平等/文化的多样性/经济增长/可持续发展/良性的竞争

  例句:(i) Although the city has invested millions of pounds in museums and art galleries (美术馆,画廊),it has done little to promote the development of healthcare services.

  (ii) Healthy life balance and exercise are strongly promoted by the NHS(英国的国家医疗服务体系).(剑9例句)

  详解:【相关】stimulate creativity / imagination / economic growth 激发创造力 / 激发想象力 /刺激经济发展

  【反义】hinder the development of …阻碍某事物的发展 【反义】is / are counterproductive 对达成目标具有阻碍作用

  二、倒退式(用来论证disadvantage消极的方面)

  1damage the environment (or someone's health /someone's self-confidence)

  破坏环境(或破坏某人的健康/ 打击某人的自信)

  例句:A regular diet of fast food can damage children’s health. 详解:【相关】is damaging to…对某事物有害

  例句:Some people think having school experience at a young age may be damaging to a child’s development.(剑桥例句)

  【区分】国内同学们在IELTS作文里经常混淆damage 和destroy 这两个词,其实它们的区别很明确:damage sth. 是常规意义上的破坏,如果及时采取措施就仍然有可能去改变或者减轻这种破坏所带来的影响。而destroy sth. 则强烈地暗示该破坏已经到了beyond repair 的程度,无法再减轻或者修复了。

  2 cause anxiety (or stress/misunderstanding/resentment/climate change/traffic accidents/safety concerns)

  导致焦虑(或者压力/ 误解/ 怨恨/ 气候变化/ 交通事故/ 关于安全的担忧)

  例句:Many scientists believe that global warming is mainly caused by greenhouse gas emissions (名词短语,对于温室效应气体的排放)from energy production,transport,industry and agriculture.

  详解:【相关】result in …导致某种结果(动词短语) 【对比】prevent sth. 防止某事物的发生

  【对比】prevent sb. from doing sth. 防止某人做某事

  例句:Any kind of spare time charity work will prevent them from sitting and doing nothing.(剑9例句)

  3face fierce competition

  面对激烈的竞争(这个短语里的face 是及物动词,如果非要写得更难则是be confronted with fierce competition)

  例句:Fierce competition between companies means that consumers are better informed about the environmental impact of the products that they buy.

  详解:【相关】…is increasingly competitive. (某一领域)竞争越来越激烈 【对比】depend on co-operation and communication要依靠合作与交流

  三、中间式(用于论证中立事的观点)

  1.support/oppose....on the grounds that....

  以什么理由支持或反对某事

  2.With the development of...., vast changes awaits this country's society. History is filled with the examples of....

  随着什么的发展,这个国家发生了很大的变化。历史上有很多....的例子。

  3.The story is not rare (isolated / unique), it is one of many examples. As is shown in the table released by the government, it can be learned that… There is (no) good evidence to… We must admit the undeniable fact that… No one can deny (brush aside) the fact that… Experience (Evidence) suggests that… The same is true of… As the saying goes,....

  4.The change in…mainly results from … The increase in…is due to the fact that… Many people would claim that…

  ....的变化主要是由....造成的,....的增长造成了....的事实,很多人宣称....

  5.One of the reasons given for…is that… What is also worth noticing is that…

  ....其中的一个原因是....,但....也值得关注

  6.There are a variety of reasons for this dramatic growth in… First, … Second, … Finally, …

  造成....戏剧性增长各种各样,第一....,第二....,最后....

  7.There is no evidence to suggest that…

  没有证据表明……

  8.Why are (is / do / did)…? For one thing, … For another, …

  为什么…?一方面…,另一方面…

  雅思写作考试中面对标题有时候会心慌慌的,不知道该怎么写,其实5分雅思作文和8分雅思作文更多的是在于如何巧妙的表达出自己的核心思想,希望今天的内容对大家的雅思作文有所帮助。

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