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雅思大作文-年轻人口增长话题

2018-02-05编辑: 天空来自: 环球教育教研团队

  今天环球教研中心给大家带来的雅思7+高分范文之雅思大作文-年轻人口增长话题,感兴趣的同学千万不要错过我们的精彩内容!

  Task-2 题目=(原题20080419)

  Figures show that some countries have an ever-increasing proportion of the population who are aged 15 and younger. What do you think are the current and future effects of this may be for the countries?

  题目分析

  题目的现象:一些国家的年轻人(15岁及以下)人口比例上升。

  题目中立:题目并没有positive或negative的意思

  问题:对这些国家的影响 (1)现在;(2)未来

  注意时态:现在的影响 (一般现在+现在完成)

  未来的影响 (将来时 + 将来完成时 + 虚拟)

  范文

  Compared to the aging of population, will it be much easier to make the conclusion that the increase of those aged 15 and younger has all positive effects on the country? Apparently not, as both positive and negative influence can be seen at present and will be expected in the future.

  Such an increase in population can lead to more juvenile delinquency in society. It is a fact universally acknowledged, that this population from young children to teenagers requires not only care but also attention from their parents. However, when both of their parents take on the role as the breadwinners in most countries, having no time to take care of them, they as a matter of fact feel abandoned or even rejected. With such negative feeling, they usually go to their peer groups. Ironically, only coming to a group with many others suffering a worse and more terrible situation will they take more comfort than in a positive group. Then, it is obvious that these children resort to many bad habits, such as smoking, drinking alcohol and so forth.

“雅思大作文-年轻人口增长话题”

  However, it does not seem to be all negative, meaning that positive effects can be projected in the coming future, as they grow up. With this increase in the country, there will be more and more young adults with professional expertise coming into social construction and national development. As we know, children are the future of a country. Besides, given that advances in technology have already improved medical condition and treatment to make human longevity, many countries now are beginning to suffer many social problems due to the aging of population. Therefore, the increase of this population can be seen as the key to alleviating the negative influence in the future, for instance, the shortage of main workforce.

  To recapitulate, it is impossible to make a clear judgment on this charge in population. With this increase, juvenile crime rises in society as the result of emotional neglect by many parents, while it is estimated to mitigate many social issues brought by the aging of population.

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